Re: Redemption of a dark elf?
Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2012 11:11 am
It all realy depends on what the devine intervention does if it adds to the story or not.
Deus-ex-machina type devine intervention is never a good story element. However, that isn't the only type there is, and often even devine interention is bound by rules. A good example of great devine intervention as a story tool to kick off the tale is the "Thomas Covenant" serries by Stephen Donaldson. There devine intervention just starts the story, but leaves the main character drifting and unsure of what to do. It creates as many issues as it solves.
Similar in this case. The devine intervention in the plot Ele sketched could simply be that the Sorceress is left behind, dying in a ditch. Isha takes pity on her (for what-ever reason you want to add in) and because she is a goddess for all elves, not just high ones, she saves the sorceress. Without expecting or demanding anything in return, she heal the physical wounds to the point where the sorceress doesn't die anymore.
The DE sorceress then can start questioning everything she believes in and has been brought up with. The selfless act to which she ows her life is completely strange to her. This starts the change, and the rest is up to the sorceress and the story to solve.
Rod
Deus-ex-machina type devine intervention is never a good story element. However, that isn't the only type there is, and often even devine interention is bound by rules. A good example of great devine intervention as a story tool to kick off the tale is the "Thomas Covenant" serries by Stephen Donaldson. There devine intervention just starts the story, but leaves the main character drifting and unsure of what to do. It creates as many issues as it solves.
Similar in this case. The devine intervention in the plot Ele sketched could simply be that the Sorceress is left behind, dying in a ditch. Isha takes pity on her (for what-ever reason you want to add in) and because she is a goddess for all elves, not just high ones, she saves the sorceress. Without expecting or demanding anything in return, she heal the physical wounds to the point where the sorceress doesn't die anymore.
The DE sorceress then can start questioning everything she believes in and has been brought up with. The selfless act to which she ows her life is completely strange to her. This starts the change, and the rest is up to the sorceress and the story to solve.
Rod