So, I have this Warhammer 40K. . . Alternate History I guess you'd call it, with a very Christian angle. Various incarnations of it have been on other sites at one time or another. And the reponses ranged from positive to this sucks.
So my question is this: Do ya'll think you'd care to take a look or does the very idea make you want to puke and would I better off spending my time on something else?
EDIT: To clarify, the premise is someone sees through the Emperor's psychic projection and kills him in the course of the Unification Wars. The story deals with what happens next as the Emperor's spirit (actually a surviving shred of the essence of the chaos god of order) struggles through the warp to regain its lost power.
Question about possible story?
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Mr. Brownstone
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Question about possible story?
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Elessehta of Yvresse
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Dude, you can write what ever you want, as long as you follow the forum rules you're sweet!
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Bumpity-bump
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Malossar
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Re: Question about possible story?
i wouldn't mind reading it at all!
You'll find most of us aren't hear to critique or be overly critical. We really just enjoy sharing/hearing stories around the digital campfire!
You'll find most of us aren't hear to critique or be overly critical. We really just enjoy sharing/hearing stories around the digital campfire!
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Elessehta of Yvresse
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Re: Question about possible story?
You might also notice that this isn't a very active part of the forum, there are maybe half a dozen that frequent it and not all of them are storytellers ^_^
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Mr. Brownstone
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Re: Question about possible story?
Okay, then. I'll post some tonight. I have a thick skin to shield my massive ego 
So don't worry about being over critical and if you don't like it then I'll stop.
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